Monday, January 17, 2011

New conclusion of the Seven Deadly Sins

The first technique I will use to create the new conclusion will be, A warning based on the essay's thesis. This will help conclude the essay because I can explain why these seven deadly sins are important to be aware of.

When walking into Wegmans you should be aware of the seven deadly sins. By being aware of them you can be conscious not become just another rude customer trying to get their groceries. You can also expect that other people will be performing them so you can keep a safe distance. If people don’t become aware of the seven deadly sins then shopping at Wegmans will not be as enjoyable of an experience because everyone will be only focused on themselves.

The second technique I will use to create a second conclusion will be ending a discussion of a problem with a recommendation of course of action. This will help the end of my paper by showing how important it is to stop this problem at Wegmans.

            We need to make people aware of the Seven Deadly Sins so they better understand how it can hurt the employee feelings. Just because Wegmans is about great customer service doesn’t mean that the customer has the right to show no respects to the cashiers. By making people aware of the Seven Deadly Sins both the customers and employees will have greater respect for each other and make Wegmans a better place to shop at.

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